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Holy shit! I saw your forum post and decided to give this movie a watch and it was great! The story you were telling was so great! The imagery was really well done too. The sounds, played very well with the animation aspect of it. However I would have liked to see a little bit more animation in this. It seemed fairly slow going, but it told a wonderful tale and it intrigues me to know more, or see where this detective could go. You could cover many roads from the plastic island to his revenge on the rich guy. Another thing I would like to see improved is your human figure. It seemed very disproportionate when we first come upon the man in the sewer by the hanging alligator, compared to the later shots of the people with the faces (Which were incredibly realistic) Overall this movie was great and I look forward to seeing what you can do! Maybe add more voices too? Fantastic piece brotha, keep it up!

Joenu responds:

Thanks a lot. You're right. There should be more animation in it. I'll do that in my next movie. Also I must improve the figure animation.
Cheers, mate